One
I have a job for you
The bedroom window was open as it was a very balmy night, it wasn’t open wide, just wide enough to let some air in. The first cat was a large male, I first noticed that he was sat on the window sill and barely had enough time to see a terrible rash all over his body before two more cats came in and all three ran quickly into my en-suite. I was still in shock from seeing the cats when a tall man entered the room, he was dressed in a black suit and claimed to be a Scientist. He had a large tank in his hand that appeared to be full of animals; I could see many balls of grey fur and right at the very front were two rabbits that looked identical to Bonnie and Lilly, two rabbits that had lived with me many years before. The grey balls of fur were chinchillas all that looked very much like my chinchilla Bruce, who sadly died six years ago.
“I have a job for you”. Mr Scientist explained, he then left the room and returned with two smaller tanks, one larger than the other, both also filled with animals; one tank appeared to be filled with insects and large spiders whilst the other seemed to be full of fancy mice and small birds.
“What is the job?” I asked.
“It is a research position”. He replied. He then handed me two envelopes. “Open these envelopes in 48 hours, no sooner, by which time you will have found suitable living quarters for all of these animals”.
“I’m sorry” I replied, “but I really don’t have space for all these animals”.
“Yes you do!” he shouted and went on to open a door that I have never seen before. “Look” he said, opening the door which revealed a huge room the size of a basketball court.
“Wow, I have never seen this room before”. I said, turning round to find that Mr Scientist had disappeared.
I thought back to the cats, typical, I had never had mice, chinchillas and rabbits in this room before and now that I did I had three strange cats, one with what looked like a contagious skin condition, hiding in my en-suite. I decided it would be best to move all three tanks into the large room and get a better idea of what I was dealing with. First I emptied the large tank – a decision I would immediately regret when I realised what was actually inside. As soon as I opened the tank a ferret wearing a muzzle jumped out of both the tank and muzzle and began to run around the room, quickly followed by at least twenty chinchillas and fifteen rabbits, all of which looked identical to either, Bruce, Bonnie or Lilly. I could not bear the thought of witnessing a ferret attack on such obvious prey, so decided to make a harness out of some braces I had in my room. When I realised exactly how big this tank was, I thought about the other two tanks, perhaps I could split up the animals in the other tanks between the three tanks. Mr Scientist had said that I must find suitable accommodation for all of these animals after all.
Looking closer at the smaller tanks I realised that the spider and insect tank housed only tarantulas and crickets, should I separate them? If I took the crickets out, what would I feed the tarantulas? I decided to leave them in. That left the tank containing the mice and birds, these must be separated. I chose to keep the mice in the small tank and move the birds into the larger tank until I could find something more suitable, this task was a lot easier than I thought, I just put the smaller tank into the larger tank, opened the door and all the birds flew into the large tank leaving me with a small tank filled with around fifteen fancy mice.
Now what about these three cats? Were they part of my task? Mr Scientist hadn’t left any contact details and seemed rather serious about me not opening the envelopes for at least 48 hours. What should I do? I went to see if the cats were still in the en-suite and indeed they were. As I opened the door the large male – who I will now call Scabby, began hissing at me, the smaller cats were both asleep on the floor. I slowly reached out to see if it was possible to calm Scabby down, but he let out a loud screech and scratched my arm. Fantastic, I guess this means that the cats want to live in my en-suite.
Now I had found somewhat suitable accommodation for all the animals, I decided it was time to make a wee shopping list. What did I need? My first thought was hay. I would cover parts of the basketball court in hay, loads of hay. What about the birds? Bird food was needed and definitely branches. The mice? Mouse food and wood again. The cats? Cat food and definitely something for Scabbys’ skin condition. There seemed to be more than enough crickets to keep the tarantulas going, thankfully.
I can’t drive so I am going to need to let someone in on my task, although for some reason I get the impression this isn’t such a good idea, at least not until the 48 hours are up and I know what the actual task is. My thoughts kept returning to Scabby, his skin condition looked awful, and if these cats were part of my task, did the en-suite count as suitable accommodation? I couldn’t think of anyone I could share this with. I guess I could just go to a big pet shop and get a taxi home.
I headed out to pets at home (I know, but needs must) as I knew I could get everything there, even branches. I will admit the whole basketball court full of animals excites me somewhat. I hope I get to keep the basketball court when this is all done. As I ticked everything off my list and headed towards the check-out, a sales girl approached me.
“Wow” she said. “That’s a lot of stuff”.
“Yeah” I replied, how observant. She wasn’t finished “What do you need all this for?” nosey.
“An animal sanctuary” more or less the truth I guess. I avoided eye contact as I really couldn’t be bothered with more questions this was my task and mine alone.
I got home, set everything up and released the birds from the large tank into the basketball court, and then remembered the wee ferret. I had left him tied up. I guess I was going to have to keep an eye on him. I picked him up and luckily he seemed rather tame, I named him Hamish and decided that he would be my new pal.
“Come on then, Hamish; let’s see what we can do for Scabby”.
“I will help you if you don’t make me wear that muzzle” Hamish said.
“You talk?” I did not believe it, but I guess all of this was rather strange.
“Yes, sometimes too much which is why I’m always wearing that muzzle”.
“I thought that was to stop you eating the animals”.
“I wouldn’t eat my friends”.
“Do you know what’s wrong with Scabby?”
“He has an attitude problem”.
I like this ferret. “No, I mean his skin?”
“It looks ok to me”.
“What?” I said looking round at Scabby, “Haven’t you seen the state of his f….”
I turned round to see Scabby, sat on my toilet cleaning himself, without any sign of a skin problem.
“But earlier, he was covered in scabs and he looked contagious”.
“He has many ways to keep people away”.
Ahh, this is all too weird. I am talking to a ferret. This was exhausting, I was now down to around 42 hours, but I guess I have done what was asked? Had I?
“Do you know anything about my task?” I asked Hamish.
“I assume you got the research position and not the lab technician role?”
“A lab technician role? What kind of lab?”
What have I got involved in?
“They have a few different types of labs, it’s all kept rather hush-hush as the public tend not to approve”.
“I don’t think I approve”. Where do you stand on all this?”
Hamish looked rather upset. “I am very much against it, but also rather grateful”.
“Grateful?”
“Yes, I am grateful that a failed experiment means I can talk. I will never be considered replaceable. A talking ferret is rather valuable to Science”.
“Wow. What about the rest of the animals?”
“I am the only talking subject left from my generation. Back then we were mainly used for testing painkillers, painkillers intended or human infant use.”
“Is that when you found you could talk?”
“That was during a study on pain and vocalisations, I am not sure how it happened exactly, and I just remember one day I found that I was able to think out loud. It’s just a shame that the rest of the animals cannot”.
“What tests do they do now?”
“It’s mainly cosmetics and household products. It’s much harder to justify than testing for the sake of children”.
I nodded in agreement, although I still could not believe I was having this conversation with a ferret.
“Do you know what happens to these animals at the end of my task?”
“They will go back to the lab”.
This was depressing. What had originally felt like a dream was now feeling like my worst nightmare, literally.
My head was racing. What kind of test was this? Could I get out of it? I got the impression it was best not to ask Hamish too many questions at the moment. Was my task to save these animals? Perhaps that’s what was meant by finding them suitable accommodation? Did I feel capable of giving these animals back to Mr Scientist knowing their fate? Especially considering that so many of them so closely resembled animals that I had loved in the past. I thought back to the lion-head rabbits and chinchillas in the basketball court. They were identical to Bonnie, Lilly, and Bruce. Was this a coincidence?
I decided it was best to look around for more clues. I left Hamish sleeping in my bed and went into the basketball court to have a look.
Read chapter 2 here Mr Scientist – Chapter 2
Great story! keep on writing and doing your thing
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Thank you! I’m working on Chapter 3 just now 🙂
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Interesting read, will make a great book someday!
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Thank you!
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Great post, keep up like that
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This is definitely an interesting topic! looking forward to the next chapters 🙂
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Insects and spiders? Okay, I would be done and fainted right away, haha. I don´t mind them very much but when I see many of them in the one place, it kinda causes me a little panic attack, haha. Interesting story! I would like to read another chapter! 🙂 ◠‿◠
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Love your style of writing!
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Looking forward to the next installment! Interesting story!
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You have some amazing skills as an author. You should definitely write a book. This story is really good!
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Thank you!
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Lovely post! I’m looking forward to reading more! Thank you for sharing!
Toya
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So I need to know what happens next and what clues he finds.
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I like your writing style. It flows and is very easy to read. Love it when people get creative doing what they love. Make sure to let us know what happens next.
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interesting topic to use as inspiration for a story, I enjoyed it thanks for sharing 🙂
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Thanks for reading 🙂
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Great story! And I am really entertained, keep on writing coz want to read more 🙂
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This is amazing. Loved the imagery and the narration. Intriguing story line too 🙂
Would love to read more of it.
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awesome!! You are such a great writer!
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Keep going! I’m intrigued.
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Nice hook. Describe Scabby condition in more detail.
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Oooh, suspenseful story! I hope the animals don’t have to go back to the lab!
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I kind of predicted that Hamish will talk, because of the conversation lines my eyes scanned. The intro wasn’t sufficient I think you have to work on it. Although my mind was following the sequence of the events, having a bigger issue to resolve the tortured animals is worth the turn. Looking forward to see what is the envelope, but it gotta be really creative since I already predict stuff. It’s just my opinion I used to criticize stories in my other language. Good reads. Don’t give up on it.
GIGI X
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Thank you for such good feedback. Please keep reading I’ll need your input for the next few chapters 🙂
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Great story. I really love animals. So it’s always nice to read about them. Interesting subject.
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Great story. Looking forward to reading more.
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I enjoyed reading this. Looking forward to the next installment.
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I really enjoyed reading this story. Cant wait to read more:) Are you publishing this into a book?
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What a fun and creative story. Would love to see some pictures/illustrations to go with it.
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Maybe an emoji or graphics with a mouse wearing a hat?
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Yeah, I’m thinking that for the fancy mice and we meet more animals in the next chapter. Thanks for reading 🙂
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Ohh, cant wait to read more 🙂
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Thank you
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I hope they find a better fate for the animals. Looks like a really great story and looking forward to more.
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Thank you for reading
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This is such a gripping story! I was pretty much sold from the photo in the beginning 🙂
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Thank you
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Hello. Is this story about animal testing? It will be interesting to know what happens next. I hope the animals will eventually be alright. How often will you be posting updates about this story?
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Hopefully a chapter or two a week. I’m working on chapter 2 just now
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Can’t wait to read your next chapter! I usually prefer stories which are completed rather than waiting for chapters to be updated~
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I know, me too. I thought that posting one chapter at a time would help me write it faster
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I love this! I love your writing, you can totally be an author of an amazing book -or lots of books- someday!
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Thank you. Chapter 2 coming soon
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I love your story. So sweet. On the other hand, can’t stand the sight of spiders or insects – gotta crush them to pieces. Lol! Keep it up with the write-up!
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Oh no! Don’t crush spiders, they are awesome 🙂
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That’s a really interesting story! It did make me a little sad in the end, I love animals and I don’t want them to be harmed. I hope everything goes well in the end! How painfully exciting!
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Thank you.
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I can’t wait to read more about what happens next to the animals. It seemed like he was dreaming at first and then things suddenly became even more exciting!
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Thank you
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This story is irresistible, have stumbled your post. Let people read it and get your message.
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Thank you
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This story is great, I will read the part two. Also your writing skills are really good.
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Thank you. I’m working on chapter
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I am an animal lover and against any harm caused to them. Your writing style is quite interesting!
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Thank you
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We have another storyteller in the house – and with an advocacy to boot. Good one!
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Thank you. 🙂
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This was deep and real to my knowledge and I enjoyed every bit of this. Your writing it top notch. Next chapter please.
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Aww thank you. I’m working on Chapter 2 🙂
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Awesome read! I cannot wait to kno what happens to the animals and when Hamish gets up. Looking forward to reading more. Keep up the great work. 😊
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I can’t wait for chapter 2. I love that you did this Ive been wanting to do something like this on my blog. ❤
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I was hooked right at the first part of it. Great job on writing this. I loved it.
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I can’t wait to know more! What is it about waiting 48 hours? Is he to kill them? to help them escape? I need to knoooow
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You have some really writing skills. Great job with this one. Can’t wait to read more!
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I think you have an interesting premise.
The opening line I thought was actually well done. It set the scene and expressed the mood of the piece to come.
Well done on your start.
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